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Just like the clown
I am sad
underneath every painted face
is a mask
why did you let it go
so your make up could run
all the colours of your face
sure look spun

So when when
will you feel pain again
always and honestly after
every sin
Im smiling
now you see the scary side
Im a twin
the other ones in.

Why is everything itching
to get out
all your left with is you pale
and your crowd
we really must teach them
to ignore
in every hopeless place
so just like me
the dark rests my taste.

another and
how many feel this way
all kids act like this for days
whoever notices
pick at your wounds
once a month
under the mask
who ever frays
did they see them coming for you
yes the truth has its ways
but the mask hides the execute
so the executioner stays.

So at home at last
from the school
the very place I pass
every single day at home
the truth is always masked.

So when when
when will the illusion end
only during comercial breaks
after I go to bed
take off the painting off youth
show bruises instead
how dare you speak in voilece
towards the bed
so now the clown smile slips
a little to the left.
©2005-2009 ~thekeyzrox
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Oh my... your poetry is astonishing! I love your preveiw image, the wicked-looking grin. You poem is definitely going on my list!

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:damphyr:
Great make-up ahah reminds me of the joker....i love the joker =)

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Woah, okay, thats just... stunning. Beautiful piece, I absoloutley love it. Woah!

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"Just need to get past all the lies and hypocrisy, make-up and hair, to the truth behind every face"
wow thank you. I feel very honoured for my poetry to be called astonishing. :bow::peace:and:love:Im just I can reach people with it.

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I am exactly what
you think Im not!

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:yawn::brushteeth::teevee::hungry::shrug::idea::weed::lmao::boogie::clap::strong::bored::drunk::ignore::saddrunk::fear::stereo::headbang::flirty::blowkiss::strip::sleep:
oh kewl. Im really glad. I feel as though everyone is really blind when they read. and you have to create the senses throught out your piece. :nod::peace:and:love:and:hug:

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I am exactly what
you think Im not!

one day in the life of me:

:yawn::brushteeth::teevee::hungry::shrug::idea::weed::lmao::boogie::clap::strong::bored::drunk::ignore::saddrunk::fear::stereo::headbang::flirty::blowkiss::strip::sleep:
thank u I love them too. altho this aint my photo. so I cant claim anything for that. it just went too well with my piece.

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I am exactly what
you think Im not!

one day in the life of me:

:yawn::brushteeth::teevee::hungry::shrug::idea::weed::lmao::boogie::clap::strong::bored::drunk::ignore::saddrunk::fear::stereo::headbang::flirty::blowkiss::strip::sleep:
It's the truth, and your welcome. It doesnt sound like the other things here, I can tell ya that.

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:damphyr:
wow kewl. I love to be original. but I guess everyone does in there own little way.

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I am exactly what
you think Im not!

one day in the life of me:

:yawn::brushteeth::teevee::hungry::shrug::idea::weed::lmao::boogie::clap::strong::bored::drunk::ignore::saddrunk::fear::stereo::headbang::flirty::blowkiss::strip::sleep:
Yeah, but I see a lot of people write poems, and they whine instead of write, lol.

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:damphyr:
well I guess thats the difference. I want to be honest about my feelings. every picture has to be painted in order to be seen right?

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I am exactly what
you think Im not!

one day in the life of me:

:yawn::brushteeth::teevee::hungry::shrug::idea::weed::lmao::boogie::clap::strong::bored::drunk::ignore::saddrunk::fear::stereo::headbang::flirty::blowkiss::strip::sleep:

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